"You told me I was beautiful.
But I didn't believe you.
Your words felt like poison as they spat on my imperfect skin.
Burning into little white memories.
How could something this dark and broken,
This destroyed, be beautiful?" -me.
The walls.
My-My Heart.
Untouchable.
Protected.
Just not from you...
You walked through my walls like rain
And touched my heart so gently that it burst into tears.
JUST. STAY. AWAY.
Ummmmm holy
ReplyDeleteGive me your gift please.
Amazing.
Thank you so much.
DeleteYour comments mean so much to me.
I was actually really nervous about this post...so thank you.
Totally made my day.
Wow I really love this!
ReplyDeleteI love the poem that you wrote at the beginning, it's really good!
I just love, love, love your blog!
I love your writing> You are so inspiring
ReplyDeleteOkay you're in my top two! I freaking love your writing!!!
ReplyDeleteHoly freak! How can something so simple be so complicated but so beautiful? I'm so jealous.
"You're words felt like poison as they spat on my imperfect skin."
Oh my!! This is so amazing.
I love this.
I LOVE it! Dive right into the good stuff, like an eager hand for the king sized candy bars in the Halloween bucket. It is sweet, satisfying, and leaving me hungry for more. Please, more candy!
ReplyDeleteAlso loving the crossed out 'love.'s. How'd you do that?
"cold to the touch, gentle and easy on the eyes. a stern, heartless monster that kills."
(Welcome To The Vanity Faire, Alesana)
Thank you all so much! Seriously...I'm always so nervous about my writing...and you guys make me feel so good all the time. It helps me so so much.
ReplyDeleteAnd Shawn: when you're typing your text, up at the top where you can bold, italicize or underline....it's right next to those. it says "ABC" with a line through it. just higlight the text you want, click that button and voila! super easy, but there ya go!
how do you do this?? you're writing is unreal!!
ReplyDeleteI look forward to your posts every week.
I love it. love it. love it. LOVE IT.
Your words felt like poison as they spat on my imperfect skin.
ReplyDeleteyesssss you are amazing
Your words felt like poison as they spat on my imperfect skin.
ReplyDeleteyesssss you are amazing
The walls.
ReplyDeleteMy-My Heart.
Untouchable.
Protected.
Just not from you...
You walked through my walls like rain
And touched my heart so gently that it burst into tears.
OH HOW MUCH I LOVE YOUR WRITING! MAYBE ONE DAY I COULD WRITE LIKE YOU!
"love.
ReplyDeletelove.
love.
and i think i might actually feel something if i don't cover it up." #Stolen
"love.
ReplyDeletelove.
love.
and i think i might actually feel something if i don't cover it up." #Stolen
"Burning into little white memories."
ReplyDeletestolen.
your blog is excellent, by the way.
Okay, thanks a ton. I'm gonna have to try that trick out in one of my own posts. And "cold to the touch,gentle and easy on the eyes. a stern, heartless monster that kills" has now been stolen!
ReplyDeleteYour words felt like poison as they spat on my imperfect skin.
ReplyDeleteFantastic. I love the visual picture I paint in my head from this.
"love.
ReplyDeletelove.
love."
Yes.
MORT RAINEYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
ReplyDeletegoodNESS
With all these comments I feel small and unimportant. But this is very good.
ReplyDeletethat means so much, honestly. thank you!
Deleteand you're definitely not unimportant...
Deleteseriously. you are an amazing artist and i admire your writing SO much!
You know, I wish I knew who you were. I think we would get along really well. Ahggg...
ReplyDeleteI'll second that.
Deletemy-my heart
ReplyDeletelike you were stuttering and trying to explain and afraid to say it. mmmm
You should post again soon. I really like to read your posts.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much!! I will I'm sorry, I've been sick and my computer has been having issues. So I should have two or three posts up by today or tomorrow...hopefully..
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